Ash rains, heavens weep,
Systems nudge, humans consume
And so we, like sheep?
Asp made me think of venom, while surge is a synonym for jump. Too tenuous the relationships? 🙂
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Well, I didn’t think this song was even in my memory… until I named the image above Fire Rain. Ah, the things locked within 🙂
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