#Haiku Challenge 85 @RonovanWrites

RonovanWrites Haiku Challenge 85 with prompt words – Tight, Warm

Desire wound tight

Breathless in time, languorous

Warm comfort absent.

– FlorenceT

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Vashti Quiroz-Vega says:

March 2, 2016 at 10:06 am

Hi Florence! You had me at ‘Desire wound tight’. Interesting haiku. Battery operated love?

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1. FlorenceT says:
  
  March 2, 2016 at 3:21 pm
  
  LOL 💚 Whatever you wish it to be, Vashti 😉
  
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  1. Vashti Quiroz-Vega says:
    
    March 2, 2016 at 4:03 pm
    
    Everything is there but the warmth, so that’s how I interpreted it. Ha, ha. 😉
    
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    1. FlorenceT says:
      
      March 2, 2016 at 4:07 pm
      
      Or a dud relationship… or a one night stand… endless possibilities though your suggestion is more fun? 😈
      
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      1. Vashti Quiroz-Vega says:
        
        March 3, 2016 at 3:17 am
        
        Poems do lend themselves to endless interpretations and fun. 😉
        
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