RonovanWrites Haiku Challenge 59 with prompt words – Bird, Red
The bullet awaits
As the bird sits patiently
It knows it’s the end.
My daughter S wrote this based on the book ‘Godhanger’.
“Where’s the ‘red’ part of the prompt words?”, I asked. “Well” she said rather condescendingly, “it’s subtle. What could it be if it’s an end by bullet?”
– FlorenceT
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Sad but good haiku. Your daughter is a smart one. 😀
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Rather morbid, isn’t it? 🙂
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A little but also creative. 😉
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I worry about her sometimes.
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🙂 gorgeously eccentric or quirky…
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Oh, your daughter – wow that is subtle very very clever. 🙂
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I am ‘scared’ of her, LOL!
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