RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Prompt Challenge #44 – Charge, Lover
The spark of Lovers
Charges my soul with intent
Till love slowly fades.
– FlorenceT
Image of ‘Entwined Bnw’ by Robert Gebbie
© 2015 Copyright reserved. The author asserts her moral and legal rights over this work.
It is work to not let the spark / flame dye. Very nice Haiku. 🙂
LikeLike
It is.. and acceptance. 🙂
LikeLike
Hello Florence! There’s a sad and touching tone to your haiku. It’s like someone desires true love but only finds love that doesn’t last. ❤
LikeLike
Hi Vashti, love changes…as one subsides, another grows. It’s an interesting phenomenon…this thing we call love. 🙂
LikeLike
Beautiful, both the haiku and you, Florence.
I like this one. It gave me a ‘pang’ in the heart after reading it.
LikeLike
Thank you, Hugh. And my job is done 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice one, when the love isn’t strong enough it goes away fast.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I have always wondered if being strong is a suitable measure… maybe…
LikeLike