Haiku Challenge – Turtle, Snail

Word: turtle, snail

Wow, this is a tough one, especially when I don’t have a particular affinity to these creatures… here’s the attempts anyway.

Like turtle majestic

Gliding steady assured proud

The snail is thus.

Or, as I imagine them not alive… Hope I don’t offend.

Turtle soup scrumptious

Filling the hunger within

So the snail confit.

It’s done!

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The Laughable Cheese says:

July 22, 2014 at 4:47 am

Your haikus didn’t follow the standard 5,7,5 but were … 6, 7, 4… and 6, 7, 5. At least that is what I thought of a haiku. Anyway they are cool.

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- FlorenceT says:
  
  July 22, 2014 at 5:20 am
  
  And I thought I could count! Oops! The second one is 5,7,5… isn’t it? 🙂
  
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  - The Laughable Cheese says:
    
    July 22, 2014 at 7:19 am
    
    Oh yeah it is! lol. I was reading scrumptious like it had three syllables.
    
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Meredith says:

July 21, 2014 at 2:55 pm

I’ll participate next week. Good luck all.

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Ronovan says:

July 21, 2014 at 1:22 pm

Loved that second one!!!!!!!!

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